We were learning about our favorite time of day and what we like to do.
I found it easy to get the background for my writing and do the writing
I found it challenging to find a imige for my writing and the spelling
Next time I will add more detail to my writing and put a less one more paragraphs in my writing.
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Hello Zach I like your writing but you could add some more detiel to your favourite time of the day so you can have rich, describing words. you could say what fun things you do with your family?
ReplyDeleteOk jimmy I'll do in my next post. thanks
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