We were writing about the Awapuni School triathlon we had a run, bike and swim.
I found it hard to find ritch words to put in my writing, also thinking what happened on the day.
I found it easy to get the final paragraph because it was a short final paragraph to write.
next time I will write a better last paragraph.
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